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hey everyone decided to post some projects that im working on for a client
so basically i am doing pitch presentation and i need to come up with a couple of stills and animations so here is the basic backplate and texture |
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and heres a quick render
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Looking nice, could do with a little blur on it.................dave
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I agree with dave...looks good but the balloon, in particular the basket looks a little too sharp mate.
cheers bullet Edit : maybe too bright too mate...contrast looks too good compared to the background. |
Maybe place the ballon a little diffrent. It looks a bit odd with the top of the balloon at the same level as the horizion.
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Whats the animation going to be Murambi?
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First up, look at some balloon references, your balloon is too squat. Look here for some reference images.
The basket is also a bit too small. Bristol Balloon Fiesta Hope these help. |
Make occlusion map... or i just don't see it. : )
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the lighting looks blown out and the material on the balloon just looks like a simple blinn. you could try adding some noise like a bump map or something. Also the specular highlight doesnt seem to effect the logo.
are you thinking of doing some cloth to make it ripple a bit? do they ripple in the wind? i'm not sure. also are you rendering in linear? the backplate looks a lot brighter in the second image. Whats with the crazy resolution size btw? |
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From my reference videos balloons dont look like i need to be using cloth simulations The high resolution is for a projector |
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