Safari man
 

Hello all. This is my first attempt at making a person. I hope it's good. I need to add some more detail to the clothing and give him a rifle.

Heres his face :)

And the wire

Hehe ... I like the overall design! You've got some good basic forms making him up but you topology looks a bit screwy particularly on the head and more specifically around the nose, eyes and cheeks.

Post a screen capture with a clearer wireframe.

Great first attempt!

Dave

i cant see the wire please post another one so we can see it better and this time, do not put a big green-blue plane in you background.

Sorry about the wireframe. I rendered it with the Hardwre render buffer thing and it came out blue for some reason :confused:
Heres a better shot.

Iv'e fixed up his face a bit more and added a string for his monicle (I think thats how its spelt.) :)

Hey Some Guy

If I were you I would use the current head as a reference to re-model it using about a tenth of the polygons it has now. Theres just way too much chaos in a mesh thats much too dense. Your character has potential, but IMO you're gonna have to back track a bit to get a nice clean result.

Dave

This is actually the ultra smoothed version of it. Heres the oringional

the wire

lol, nice, and i LOVE your Picture Under your name! :)

he-he. I actually look the exact opposite of it :) . Ive gone back and re done the body. It's a whole object now instead of two different ones

hey to get a wire shot go to the tabs where it says view panels etc well go to shading then in there go down to wireframe on shaded, should give peeps a better view of your models wires and also will help u in your modeling.

Iv'e basically finished the body. I need to add a back pack and pocets and other stuff. Iv'e also added a basic rigg.

Nice model, but Iwould like to throw some criticizm your way.

First- The face, please, when you model a face, you really need to ouse the edge loop principle. If you do not know what that is, tell me and I will attatch an image of edge loop example.
If that would mean redoing the face- fine. I really am surprised the smoothed mesh actually looks ok, no offense, the base mesh is pretty bad.

2nd - The fingers are too spindly and out the middle finger is too short. And you might wawnt to smooth the monaclce with the hi res model.

Thats all I have to say.

CyA LaTeR,
MaTt :alien: