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hey guys:)

This is a scene i'm working on.

I have some more to do on it, But C&C would be great!

Coolness mate!

It looks a bit blurred though.

wow man thatsas really nice. could u please tell me how to make a lightbulb

Thanks guys:)

gohan1842,

to make a lightbulb, make the lightbulb;) the on the bulb part add Blnn > color white > add some transparency > then some incanescence, then under special effects add a little glow. Then make a point light a place it inside the lightbulb and click on ray trace shadows, and that the way I make a lightbulb:)

Peltra,

here a rander without the depth of field.

wow i never thought about doing it like that. thx alot :)

looks cool.. reminds me of some creepy haunted mansion or hotel or something.

your welcome gohan1842:)

Thanks dark-link :)

It's a hotel, and i'm going for mostly a realness look to the scene, but with a little creepy feel to it like you said, so thats a good sign:)

here a little update:

i think the lights are too bright... i also think there are too many as well. maybe take a few of the light bulbs out and make it a little darker near the end. it'll create more of a mood that way IMO.

Thanks for your input dark-link:)

Hows this?

now it looks like the twilight zone...

Now it looks like you took bulbs out, but you made the other ones even brighter. Lower that light bulbs. You should also try changing the color of the too. Like add just a hair of yellow to them. Little enough that it still looks white, but adding yellow will make it look more natural. Also it looks like the walls are reflecting the light too much. Also the seam between the walls and the carpet looks kinda funny.

Other than that it's a nice looking scene, just a few technical errors to work out.

thanks guys:)

I've been really busy, but I did do a little more to the scene, but i'm still working on the lighting, which is the hardest part for me.

it's a lot better than before but i noticed a couple of things... one of your lights is burnt out :p , and there is this weird splotch of shadow on the end door.

...dude..the tricycle...
That puts me in teh mood of the shining..all the way...

Looks good htough aside form the lighting..

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