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Garyturner 23-12-2002 08:36 PM

tiny young girl
 
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a new character one day of work(little day hehe)

i model whithout any gabarit and don' known what she can be in the future...

have you some critics?

http://membres.lycos.fr/jourdainjero...lettewip02.jpg

brian_ellebracht 23-12-2002 09:25 PM

Hello. I really like the style all around, especiall around the shoes, sox and legs, her nose is really nice as well. I would only recomend, changing the inside of the eyes, they seem alittle to close to the bridge of the nose. and The corner of the lips seem a little to inset, but then again it could be the style you are going for, thats just my opinion. thanks,
Brian

dannyngan 24-12-2002 08:46 AM

That's looking very nice. Only a couple of comments. While the overall face is wonderful, I think the eye sockets under the brows are a bit too deep. Also, she needs shoulders. With her arms raised up like that, one would expect to see some shoulder muscle raise up towards the neck. Otherwise, it's coming along nicely. Can't wait to see more.

Roman 24-12-2002 09:37 AM

nice work Garyturner..
welcome to SM.. :p

Garyturner 26-12-2002 12:40 AM

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thanks for comments

i try to model this eyes, so hard

:banghead:

see the "avancement"

raul 27-12-2002 05:54 AM

hey gary what method did you use. subds. or just pollys.

Garyturner 27-12-2002 08:17 PM

i use just poly because subdiv can make problems when mapping.

brian_ellebracht 27-12-2002 08:34 PM

The corner of her eyes look much better. I think they might be a bit low though. It makes her look evil, unless that is what you are going for though. Looks good. Keep it up,
Brian

Garyturner 29-12-2002 10:25 PM

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too youg nots fun:D

little wip update

brian_ellebracht 30-12-2002 12:58 AM

wow she developed fast:eek: :). Umm... looks good, I really like it, My only critique is on the shoulders. They look a little to square, or strait. Unless she has some kind of pads or something.eventhought she has "developed" she still has kid like proportions. like the hips may be to high, and her legs aren't long enough.... Like the update, keep em commin,
(please excuse my bad spelling, I am typing really fast)
THanks,
Brian

raul 30-12-2002 05:19 AM

damn flower child. hehhe cool stuff bro. nice rendering.

Garyturner 30-12-2002 08:03 PM

thanks for constructive comments guys. i realy appreciate those :)

hehe pardon my poor english :/

Garyturner 03-01-2003 03:06 AM

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new update

Garyturner 05-01-2003 03:52 AM

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here's new uptate
mmmh the way of the child is out, now a lolita :D

im like a turtle when i model speed is for another
:sleep:

Bimbo 05-01-2003 04:43 PM

Very good work. Try to char. setup her :D


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