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AikoWorld 01-10-2007 06:15 AM

Lulu on the walk.
 
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Here is lulu on the walk char buildup

Comments and crit's are welcome!

AikoWorld 01-10-2007 07:15 AM

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added a wand design. i'm still not happy about the hands area, they look a bit small, hmz, will have to tweak there.

jali 01-10-2007 07:22 AM

nice work !!!!!!

i have to agree the hands are looking abit on the small size though i doubt it will take long to fix, so it shouldn't be to much back tracking

AikoWorld 01-10-2007 11:22 PM

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thx jali :D

fixed alot of areas (neck,knee,breasts,hand)

Only the hands are still a bit flat, still working on it. i have already started texturing, so i can see the feal that i'm going for.

AikoWorld 01-10-2007 11:24 PM

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other viewpoint to see the hand a bit better.

AikoWorld 02-10-2007 03:07 AM

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update

AikoWorld 03-10-2007 03:06 AM

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update on geometry, basic lighting, and hard shadows :p

The lighting needs to change anyways :)

next up making a basic rig, (very basic) to make a pose i realy like. then background scenery.

AikoWorld 03-10-2007 03:08 AM

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wireframe

AikoWorld 03-10-2007 03:57 AM

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i gave it a warmer collor then pink

Any suggestions on collor range?

Some Guy 03-10-2007 06:02 AM

This is really good, I like this cartoon style of modeling.
The only change with the color i can think of would be to maybe change the shoes to contrast a bit with the legs.

Keep it up :)

AikoWorld 05-10-2007 04:39 PM

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thx very much for the suggestion, i have updated that collor, will do a new render when the background is finished

start of the background, next up, the hill in the distance, then some grass sprites and flowers, then some fairy particles flying in the sky

here is the update

AikoWorld 05-10-2007 11:37 PM

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anyone have a crit on the pose go for it, i'm very eager to hear your visions

Much appreciated!

LauriePriest 06-10-2007 12:11 AM

Oppose the hips and the shoulders so that the characters left arm swings forward while the right left extends for the landing.

You will also want the characters left side to be down as it has just pushed off from the take off.

The left hand should be thrust in the directon of the motion and the staff tilted to show its weight.

The right arm should be further back and less tensed.

The head will allways try and position itself at level so keep her looking the direction she is going and dont tilt her head up and down too much.

Oh and left foot/ toe should be pointing in the directoin from which she took off.

I dont know what look your going for but it feels like you want to do a prance, with the current gate between the steps it looks like quite an ample jump. Cute prances tend to have alot of upward motion and less forward and generous arm swings with the leading arm. and quite loose overlap in the spine.

AikoWorld 06-10-2007 04:13 PM

Thx very much LauriePriest that comment helped me alot :)

Here is the highres image.

I have no ideas at the moment to make it nicer, so i'll leave this for a while untill i have figured it out.

http://www.aikoworld.com/public_doc/LULU.jpg

DJbLAZER 06-10-2007 08:19 PM

You should change the facial expession, she looks like a blowup doll...


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