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Jim 18-06-2003 09:01 AM

Sorry, Just another male mesh
 
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Hi,

Just want some constructive critz of my character so far.

re Jim

Emo 18-06-2003 09:10 AM

:eek: OMG! this is amazing! I've never seen so much detail and acturately made human body before on this website!

maybe the abs can be seperated a bit into a 6 pack... now they look like one big long muscle...

Everything else is amazing!!

-Emo

Cyrius 18-06-2003 09:31 AM

yes i agree with you emo it s an amazing character !!! :) :) can we have a closer view of the head ??
thX

genius995 18-06-2003 09:36 AM

wow... i think this is going photo-realistic! :)

Really looks cool dude!

Jim 18-06-2003 09:36 AM

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Hi,

Thanks for the imput. Here is another view.

re jim

LauriePriest 18-06-2003 04:28 PM

what method did you use to build the head, its looking great

EagleKing 18-06-2003 06:03 PM

sorry...can't give ya crits. seems to be perfect

vladimirjp 18-06-2003 06:19 PM

is he rigged ? it looks great be the way
when you texture him be sure to post !!!!
good job
:beer:

jimmy...

roach105 18-06-2003 06:31 PM

muscle definition is great. no crits yet! Keep it up

NitroLiq 18-06-2003 07:06 PM

I agree. I think overall it looks fantastic. If I were to nitpick, though, the ears look alittle odd to me...don't know what it is....they stick out too much....they're stitched at a weird angle. Maybe it's supposed to be that way? It was the only thing that felt a little off at first glance. The modeling looks great...just the attachment looks slightly strange.

Witchy 18-06-2003 07:20 PM

That's very nice indeed!

It might be the angle but you might consider slightly increasing the width of his shoulders and chest as he looks a tiny bit top heavy head and neck wise. Conversely, if he's a thin chap his neck might be a tad thick. Not sure how exact you are being anatomically, but you might want to build up the clavicular portion of the muscle (not the bone) above the pectoralis major at the front of the chest.

The head is great- might we see a wire?

Jim 19-06-2003 10:14 AM

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HI,

Here is a wire, will also look at fixing ears and shoulder width. He, when finished (need help with texturing....Anyone??????) will be a tatooed 'inmate' wearing underpants with a big smilie face on the crotch. I want him to look 'thugish' yet not too musclely.

I have attempted this character in the past. This is really just an update in an attempt to get the feel more appriate for the character and set (jail cell). Hope that makes sense to anyone.

Thanks again!!!!!!


re Jim

mtmckinley 19-06-2003 01:34 PM

Excellent! Especially the face.

I would agree about the ears. They do not seem to be in the same style of realism as the rest of it.

Once again, great job!

Jim 22-06-2003 08:05 AM

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Hi,

Here is an update. Have made the shoulders broader and tweeked a few points. Have not fixed ears as yet though.

re Jim

Jim 23-06-2003 01:29 PM

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Hi,

Here is another update. Working on chest and collarbones.

Critz please.

re Jim


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