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Kühl 21-01-2003 07:31 PM

Piggy-style creature
 
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Heres my second poly creature. Thinks he looks pretty much of a pic. :D

And I happend to save a smoothed version over my mesh, thats why no gums for the teeth.

What do you think ?

undseth 21-01-2003 08:19 PM

A few more "bags" under the eyes, and he would be quite funny I think, making the eyes match the sagging face (wide jaw).

Just a thought, I hope you dont mind. (It was the first that came to my thought)

mtmckinley 21-01-2003 08:22 PM

good start. The thing that sticks out the most to me is his teeth. Give him some gums, show the teeth extruding from them, etc. :)

Keep it up!

Kühl 21-01-2003 09:09 PM

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tried to do what you both said....

Kühl 22-01-2003 11:33 PM

What do you think? Which modelling skills do I need to improve ?

dannyngan 23-01-2003 10:55 PM

The top of the head is too sharp. I think it should be rounder, more like the shape of a skull.

Kühl 24-01-2003 05:17 PM

Youre right danny.

Unfortunately the model wont be further developed, as I have messed up by saving at smoothed version over my origainal mesh.

I will rather start up a new one than spend a lifetime simplifying the model.

Thanks for the comments all of you.

Kevin 24-01-2003 05:25 PM

good start.... I would take away the sharpness on it on the mouth / forehead and top of head - the bag under his eye looks a little to deep..

but its a good start. Do you want me to move this thread into wips for you?

Kühl 24-01-2003 05:37 PM

Thank for the comments Kev.

I am gradually sorry that I cant get any further with this model after all the good feedback.

Dont need to move the thread... He wont be developed any further.

Kühl


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