Loking good mate. Keep it up!

nice rotbol!

lookin' hot!
keep it up!

greetzz

RanSicK

time for an update!

i've managed to finish the body with hands and all.. only thing missing is the interior of the mouth.

http://www.rotbol.dk/images/wip/pinupgirl/pinup_7.jpg

pls hit me with any crits you might have before i start UV-mapping and texturing.

and a quick render:

http://www.rotbol.dk/images/wip/pinupgirl/pinup_8.jpg

Man, you are really improving !

Crits incoming :

- Those hips .. make them curvy instead of a place to set your beer :P
- Details like knuckles and veins on the hands
- details on the knees
- something is wrong with the thighs.
- you need a little more definition of the wrists
- legs is a bit short (but that might be teh perspective)
- the feet seem a little square'ish..
- something is wrong with the prorportions at the shoulders
- lift the breasts a little

wow you definatly skilled..I can tell ya that..
you know that Im trying a female but im just at a lower stage...it's nice to see you made progress...

btw..jsut to let you know....I know caligraphics is the maker and hero of the cpstut...
so
Caligraphics...
peace out to ya! :D

greetZz

RaNsicK

looking damned awesome, but there's something up with the big toe... it just seems a bit... thin or something, not sure how to pinpoint it...

Carsten: Those are great crits. thank you! :)

ransick: i'm trying my best :P I've seen your model.. looks good!

Zyk0tik: Thanks! hm the toe? i'll look into it when i fix the ankle


i've been working on some of the things Carsten pointed out:

lifted the breasts a bit
lifted the waist line
made the hips more curved
tweaked the feet a bit
tweaked the arms and armpit
tweaked the shoulder too

http://www.rotbol.dk/images/wip/pinupgirl/pinup_9.jpg

i still have lots to tweak.. ankle, knee, wrist, hand and her neck..