thanks guys,

@Anhslaught, what honda commercial? I don't own a TV but i'd like to know what you mean is it available online?

@gohan1842, yes I know it's abit stretched. Overall I quite like the timing. In further animations I sometimes created a visual feast and stuff would follow up too quickly, that would make it impossible to take everything in.
But you are right I'll give it a little edit and chop some of the film strip bit out.
Just something random is it coincidental, or do you know your name gohan means rice/meal in japanese?

cheers