thank you guys. i'll take note of everything I think the falling off the edge thing is a must, the shot has that anticipation about it. Was that your intention? you're right there buddy, the shot has that anticipation leading the viewer to think that he's going to fall off the edge..and it was my intention really. ironicallly, i'm thingking of not making the shot end that way..but i can't think of a good idea and twist.