you need to switch the color of the 3 and the 7, and the 11 and 15. The 7 is a darker red than the 3, and the 15 is a darker red than the 15.
And i play pool constantly and the cloth texture to me seems about right. Not a tournement quality cloth, but better than a bar table.
The breakup shot isnt right. The way the balls break apart even with the loose-ness of the pack. It just isnt right, even with follow on the cue ball it still wouldnt roll in that way. I suggest you watch some billiards on tv, or better yet goto a pool hall and hit some packs with follow, draw, left/right english to see how it will work out. Its close, but not right.