what resolution did you do the final product in on flash? my widescreen resolution can't fit the story and the buttons and some of the text bubbles on the screen at one time. Kinda got annoying to try and read for me personally.
Does it work on 1280*1024?
As far as I recall even with todays standards optimal design should fit 1024*768.

Despite such sillyness it looks good and is fairly interesting as far as I have gotten. Good work.