Hey Perfecto,

The modeling from the train looks good so far! Take that concept through the hole Scene! Nice style I like that!

But I have some thougts that I have to participate.

First you must think about your story, is that really that great story, for what you will take so much hours!

You told right that concept work and storyboarding is usefull and it is necessary of course! :attn:
Your story is missing the main concepts of film making, there is no anticipation! The plot is unmotivated.
There is no suspence or human emotion in the movie, Everthing is mechanical without life and thats to bad about it!

There could be a passanger who is in dangerous hury and your plot would have an effect to the scene.
You the viewer knows now that he can´t arrive on time and the suspence is born! What will he do to arrive on time!?
Something like that would boost that short I think!
But I´m interested in and watching for updates!

Best regards