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# 10 20-03-2003 , 10:43 PM
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Nice model, great arms and nice stylish hands. Great legs.

I have a few things tho:

1. The teeth dont look like it belongs to the model, maybe add some tapering to them and maybe a smaller jaw.

2. You seem to have a strange fold from the cheeks to the jaw.

3. The upper lip is a bit too fat IMHO.

4. Theres something about the nose that seems wrong too, but maybe its just because you still need to do some detailing.

5. The head doesn't seem to match the style of the arms or vice versa, but again that can still be lack of detailing. What I am specific reffering to is the damn nice vein you have on the arms and hands, that makes it really cool and stylish.. that stylishness seem to miss in his face.

6. The chest part looks too large, just a tad - making him having huge female dwarf breasts user added image .. ( ok I play too many roleplaying games hehehe )

I hope you can use the feedback.. looks very promissing.

Kindly


Carsten Lind
Senior 3D Artist,
Maya Software Manager & Maya Instructor
LEGO Systems A/S