This is my 2nd ever animation, and Im looking for crits. I was told this is THE Maya forum... so fingers crossed...

And here is a rendered vid....


https://www.craigcrane.com/3Dworld/groover_landing.wmv

It was a rushed affair, but I do know some things I would like to change...

There is an arm sticking through the cockpit as it lands (sorted though)

Ship looks a little outta control at start

Landing is a tad to abrupt...

But, if you see anything else please let me know...

Cheers