Well Alan, speaking purely from a "I dont know anything about Maya yet but I like cool looking stuff" point of view.... this kicks ass man!

Only one question tho...... as the cam pans to the right...... whats that sharp dark line that appears in the foreground at about 10 secs to 13 secs? I thought it may be the edge of rock but one spider walks over it without gaining any altitude. Perhaps its a shadow from the terrain. Maybe you could soften that line up or break it up so its not so sharp and straight?

All in all I still say.. it kicks total ass man! Awesome work Alan.