Originally posted by urvinism I like this forum, though everything here is so sweet, i wuold like someone to crit my work like i did to his. and you should not try to make it "unsweet" im not telling you to be too easy on people's work but theres a difference once again between constructive criticism and the nonse you tried to tell him, if you want a more professional feedback, try posting on forums where the majorities are not noobies. understand? most people here are just starting out.