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# 3 24-01-2007 , 06:37 PM
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Ha ha - pretty good!

Just a couple of small crits - the laser beam at the end looks a little too solid - you might want to increase the transparency. Also, it might be nice to see something unfortunate happen to him when he trips the laser - at the moment, after seeing that he is just after some cookies, you don't get the feeling that anything bad is going to happen.

Good job and nice choice and use of music. user added image


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