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# 66 22-02-2011 , 10:26 PM
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Looking good. The last two versions of the wings look much better.

You could also experiment with making them thicker at the root edge and thinning out as they get to the outer edges and see how that works. It might be a bit tricky to make that work due to the over all shape, but just something to tinker with.

Also there is a clear crease in the canopy. I am not sure if that is intentional. Might look better either without the crease or some indication of a structural reason for it being their. Maybe a part line where the canopy separates or a frame or something.


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