Very nicely done!

Great editing, I especially like the first scene. Where's the music from, is it Danny Elfman? That scene is exactly like the first scene from....I think it is Men in Black.

Some critics:

Maybe a tad too much first-person-camera-views and camera movement.

The model of the guy reading the news paper could really need some work.

The mouth of the girl could also need some work, especially around the corners.

The ending was a bit....abrupt..

But great work!