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# 4 24-09-2007 , 11:07 PM
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Overall, it looks very good. My comments are as follows:

On the F-14: VERY nice job on the cockpit, but somehow there seems to be detail missing on the rest of the plane! I'd go over the fuselage and add the little pits, fuel caps, &c &c!

On the nude female model, the most glaring thing is the size of her cranium. It's too small! Basic anatomy puts the eyes in the center of the head. They're too far up and that makes her look, well...not quite human! :-) The clothed female looks much better, but at first glance looked a bit more semi-cartoon. If that's what you aimed for, great job!

Otherwise very nice work! :-)


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