you are getting somewhere, but... why do you have so many polygons? you should start with as few polygons as possible and only add when you need the detail
anyway, start a new thread in the WIP forum https://forums.simplymaya.com/forumdi...?s=&forumid=34
and please don't keep saying "please replay" in each post... just assume someone is going to reply... they usually do 
that's a "Ch" pronounced as a "K"
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