Thats a lot better CW...I think the shading is still too heavy. Im no expert but when I shade I try to highlight only (cartoon style) and if there is a base shade required...I would usually do it so light you can only just see it. That is damn fine work though mate....
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"A Darkness at Sethanon", a book I aspire to model some of the charcters and scenes