Cheers for your thoughts,

I can certainly use the crit and will definately put it towards any future animations that I make.

R@nSiD: One of the ideas that I had was to have him distracted by the butterfly but the deadline was looming and I still wasn't perfectly happy with the fall so I decided to work on that rather than the reason for him walking into the rake, hopefully it won't detract from the marks too much. Also having watched the playblast a couple more times, I'm inclined to agree that it doesn't really work, I'm glad I decided to concentrate on the first part now!

ZoharO: Nice words about the music and the titles, I worked hard to get the soundtrack to fit the animation, musicians out there will probably notice that the bass before the piano kicks in plays one too many bars, I had to do that to make it all work together!! The titles were thrown together in Flash, they only took an hour but I'm very pleased with the way that they turned out.

Thanks again,

Mat.