Wow thats how print screen works... to the clipboard. Lol.
Anyway here are wireframes and new renders, using photo refences has vastly improved the face, I think i'll tweak the hips as I go, I think that the issue may be in the details not the actual proportions. Also the studio is meant to be on going, a properly made set to render projects, the shot of it was just to show how it started. Please more c&c.