Great job so far, I couldn't get close to that, but it does look like he's spent a few hours in the dryer; has a few split ends :p

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"We don't actually need to know that the main character has a past. All we need to know is that he has an objective and a lot of people are going to die and a lot of innocent inanimate objects are going to be destroyed and blown up before he can complete that objective."