looks a whole load better mate, a real improvement, much larger to view, much crisper and cleaner! An answer (IMO) to your Q, on your site, Instead of a graphic novel, you should run a teaser in animation, You have the models rigged and "modeled" (all the way around) I have lots of contacts for musical overlay if required, (and they are professional and would be glad to help for free) push the boundaries my friend you have the talent! laters btw did you get my change of email?