Thanks for the Crit Pyrus I appreciate it alot.
This is my 3rd model attempt :blush:
(Yes still a noob as you can see)

I see what you mean though, Is that your render?
Dang Bro!!!! that is awesome!

I need you to tutor me

I'm getting the slowly, the reference I used was just
an outline Gi Joe thingy, that is basically how it is...
I will fix up the areas you suggested.

Thanks dude I appreciate it.