dude you posted this animation a while back and you didn't listen to a lot of our criticisms from last time. stop using different music for each camera cut ! it's VERY distracting and frankly annoying. heck even the repetitive boink noise as the H + C = SL gets old after the + falls. the actual sound effects you have in the animation are fine, just either lose the music entirely, or pick a song and stick to it!! the animation on the bike as the kid comes to a stop and the girl gets on isn't too bad, but it could be improved on. it's not very fluid. the stopping to check out your contact info is tacky, too. leave your contact info for at the beginning or at the end. don't try to incorporate it into your animation, especially since the time you took do fit that in could have been spent on improving the quality of the animation... which you apparently haven't done since the last time you've run it through here anyway.