just watched it, looks really cool. What job are you going for? animator or modeller? I'm not 100% on the start I think it could be down to one simple screen that says your name and what you do cause at the moment it's quite slow and as we know showreels have 30 seconds to impress before they are canned or accepted. So using 10 seconds on telling prospective employers who you are doesnt seem to be such a good idea.
I would put the ogre before the other animation because I think it's funnier and better than the other one (best stuff at the start of the reel and all that stuff)
Looking forward to the finished reel (makes me realise I need to staat mine! )
Alan
Technical Director - Framestore
Currently working on: Your Highness
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