Maya Training

Introduction to Hard Surface Modeling

Maya Training

Interiors and Furniture Vol 1 & 2 - Modeling & Cloth

Maya Training

Shading, Lighting and Rendering the Bedroom in MR

Maya Training

Robot volume one - Modeling with animation in mind

Maya Training

Spach-Alspaugh House the complete courseware

Maya Training

Burt The Cartoon Dinosaur Vol 01 - Modeling

New Maya Training

Batman by Jason Edwards
You are here > Home > SimplyMaya Community Forums

Welcome to Simply Maya

Please Sign in or Sign up for an account

Member Login

Lost your password?

Not a member yet? Sign Up!

Old 11-12-2006, 11:53 AM   #1
Registered User
Join Date: Dec 2006
Posts: 2
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Default My 1st Animation project Please Give Feedback

Hi all

I am newbie animator.Please watch my short film and give your feedback & Rating

Thanx for your Rating
Boomerlrr is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 11-12-2006, 01:40 PM   #2
Registered User
Zohar0's Avatar
Join Date: Nov 2006
Posts: 64
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

Hehe kind of funny. The modeling could be better but I like how you animated and modeled the people and the bus. The only thing that needs work is the sound and the storyboard. The point is lame. Also the sound could have better transitions then just cut and go and the quick fade out and in.
Zohar0 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 12-12-2006, 09:00 AM   #3
Registered User
NeoStrider's Avatar
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Cleveland, Ohio (USA)
Posts: 1,541
Thanks: 0
Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts

dude you posted this animation a while back and you didn't listen to a lot of our criticisms from last time.


it's VERY distracting and frankly annoying. heck even the repetitive boink noise as the H + C = SL gets old after the + falls. the actual sound effects you have in the animation are fine, just either lose the music entirely, or pick a song and stick to it!!

the animation on the bike as the kid comes to a stop and the girl gets on isn't too bad, but it could be improved on. it's not very fluid. the stopping to check out your contact info is tacky, too. leave your contact info for at the beginning or at the end. don't try to incorporate it into your animation, especially since the time you took do fit that in could have been spent on improving the quality of the animation... which you apparently haven't done since the last time you've run it through here anyway.
Accept no substitutions.
NeoStrider is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 13-12-2006, 06:35 AM   #4
Registered User
arran's Avatar
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Brooklyn, NY
Posts: 3,708
Thanks: 0
Thanked 9 Times in 9 Posts

He's posted it using a different name this time and he's also posted it under chat as well!!

come on Boomerlrr - let's see something new mate.

arran3D blog
arran is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 20-12-2006, 04:05 PM   #5
Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 1,937
Thanks: 0
Thanked 8 Times in 8 Posts

haha yeah your right, no wonder i seen this vid before please dont double post again Boomerlrr, thanks
marlonjohn is offline   Reply With Quote

A little bit about who we are
Links you might find useful
Catch up with SimplyMaya
SimplyMaya specialises in Maya tutorials. We offer over 1,000 individual Maya training videos, ranging from basic Maya tutorials through to intermediate Maya tutorials. Our tutorials are created by instructors with industry experience and are designed to get you up and running in Maya quickly without making it seem like hard work.

Copyright © 1999-2015 SimplyMaya - vBulletin® Copyright © 2000-2015, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.