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Old 26-03-2008, 01:07 PM   #1
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Default plane

a plane ive been working on for a while.
http://gti.graniteschools.org/cpg144.../explosion.jpg

tell me what you think
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Old 26-03-2008, 07:24 PM   #2
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Looks cool, my crit would be to add motion blur to the propellers
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Old 26-03-2008, 11:07 PM   #3
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PLz could you post up a wireframe shot of the plane, it looks pretty good so far, but the area between the nose and the cockpit looks like it could do with some work.

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Old 29-03-2008, 06:20 AM   #4
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am i seeing this correctly? does your plane have propellers in front of jet engines?
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1 question: Is that wheel almost as big as half of the plane?
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ooh wow good point...

with the color of the background image, i think i would change the color of the specular highlights on the plane - cause since the background's bluish and orange the highlights on the plane shouldn't be white.
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hey thanks for the input.....i havnt been on in a few days and ill get a wireframe render up as soon as i get to my school computer.
im thinking of entering my conpleted pic into
utah multimedia arts festival so if you could continue critique my work as i post updated images that would be greatly appreciated.
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