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Old 20-02-2012, 06:58 PM   #1
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Interesting concepts man.....weird...

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It looks a little to much like a head is that what its supposed to be.........dave
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It's organic head with mechanic parts. Bio-Mechanical Space Station
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Theres nothing to suggest scale. Its just a head floating on a background

try adding smaller details. Also the jaws texture, the wear and tear is too big for something thats supposed to be big. You gotta justify why its worn in those areas only as well.

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Theres nothing to suggest scale. Its just a head floating on a background

try adding smaller details. Also the jaws texture, the wear and tear is too big for something thats supposed to be big. You gotta justify why its worn in those areas only as well.

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