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The first thing I noticed in this last render were the headlights, you might want to extrude those edges inward to give it a lip so its not paper thin and gets rid of that jagged shape.

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hmm yeah, that head light looks like a sticker...

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will work on that but my comp just crashed and its a new machine damn vista

ouch, bad luck dude!

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finally the comp is up and running .... i think im finally done with the body unless you guys can see something i can correct i want to move on to the rims

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and a test render

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my hard disk crashed so i had to start this project all over again i must say i was tempted to dump it but i feel like i have to finish it

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Originally posted by murambi
my hard disk crashed so i had to start this project all over again i must say i was tempted to dump it but i feel like i have to finish it

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always take a crash as a sign to improve. Don't let it hold you back. If you learned anything the first time around, it should be how to model this bad boy. So you should be quicker, and be able to get smoother looking lines and flow much much easier.

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yeah i was much quicker than before it took me a day to catch up to what i had lost and i think it looks much better heres as a quick render

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fixed the front abit andworking on the back right know

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and the back

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Its coming along. Though I think there are a few uneven areas like around the roof and the windows seem a bit concave, makes me feel like its crumbing a bit. Hope you don't have anymore PC issues anytime soon :x

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the body still need more attention cause like genny said the body is still bumpy uneven, and doesnt really look like the real car. my suggestion is take a look at pictures of the real car and compare it yours, also take each part of the car like the hood or bumper and concentrate on the modeling it closer to the real car. lastly just do the best you can its always a great learning effort...forgot to ask is this your first car?

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Yeah theres lumps and bumps, Lion hit the nail on the head.

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