Mystic Winter

# 1 08-06-2007 , 08:01 AM

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Hi Guys I am new to this forum and here is my work for your C&C .Hope in future I'll put some more of my work.

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# 2 08-06-2007 , 08:48 AM

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great start but you need to cut back alittle on the falling snow as its really hard to see the details on the building and the tree. I did not even see the boy there sitting at first

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# 3 08-06-2007 , 11:41 AM

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Wow, it looks really good! I like the cartoony touch you made to it. I agree with tweety though, thereÕs too much snow.
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# 4 08-06-2007 , 05:29 PM

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yeah - and for the amount of snow there is - why isn't the roof covered with snow like the ground?

nice model though - lets see some more views!

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# 5 08-06-2007 , 09:47 PM

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Originally posted by arran
yeah - and for the amount of snow there is - why isn't the roof covered with snow like the ground?

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Ever heard of a roof shovel? :p

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# 6 09-06-2007 , 12:49 AM

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seriously, image looks nice; i agree about th esnow; too much, and possible flakes a bit too big
other then that good work
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# 7 09-06-2007 , 03:02 AM

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Thanks guys for all your creative remarks I am sure it will help me in improving my work further.Snow looks bit odd may be b'coz it's a still image and you are unable to look the character but once you look this in a moving images with motion blur I think it will solve some of the problem ,but I 'll look into this .

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# 8 11-06-2007 , 04:13 PM

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I think that the snow is in good quantities, but the flakes do need to be smaller. I also agree with the roof and ground snow level differences. Great stuff though! Do you have some kind of animation to go along with it or anything? Looks good! KUTGW!

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# 9 11-06-2007 , 08:21 PM

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I like it alot. I think you did really well on adding irregularities to the scene like the windows, roof, chimney, etc.

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# 10 11-06-2007 , 10:50 PM

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looks good man only crit is what tweetytunes said about the snow...

ive looked at this thread 4 times now and i just noticed theres a kid there

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# 11 13-06-2007 , 11:53 PM

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yeah the snow is putting this render down atm, its really hard to tell whats in the scene without the snow blocking it :p

as acid just said in his comment, i just relised the kid AND also there is a satellite user added image

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