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# 46 19-07-2004 , 05:30 PM

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SO if there arent any more suggestions for additional details i will come over to the texturing part....or do you have some tips?

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# 47 19-07-2004 , 07:24 PM

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the model looks ok. but i would work on the proportions more. the legs are tiny compared to the rest of the body, and the wings are also not long enoug, they don't look like they are big enough for it to fly with. and make the head a bit wider than the neck. right now it just look like a straight line from neck to head.
work on the smaller things also, this way u can finalize all the modeling then move on to UVs and texturing

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# 48 20-07-2004 , 05:04 PM

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new renders...only to show the wings....nothing about the texturing yet....

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# 49 20-07-2004 , 05:07 PM

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# 50 20-07-2004 , 07:10 PM

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wings look much better. now work on the legs a bit more and the size of the head.

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# 51 20-07-2004 , 07:58 PM

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I have to agree...the wings definately look much better Dragonhawk! user added image

I really like how you added the joints in the wings as well. The wings also look a lot better being a little larger, and also that you have them more attached to the body more. Keep up the great work! user added image

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# 52 20-07-2004 , 09:39 PM

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wow mist this thread for a while...finally it got serious again tho user added image

so yo dragonhawk! how are you doin'
You deff progressed the dragon! looks nice allready, doesn't it user added image

would do some tweaking on the body still to get some better proportions but the most thing that's bottering right now is the wing...

I guess you didn't see the tut of the dragonhead/dragonbody...
There Kurt shows that doing just the bones of the wings and make the wing itself with nurbs is the most easiest way! but the most important that it would be more realistic too! It would deff give a more organic look to it!

keep it up! you are going to make this happen dude ! catch ya later dragonhawk

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# 53 21-07-2004 , 07:17 AM

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xxx

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Last edited by dragonskin; 21-07-2004 at 05:20 PM.

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# 54 21-07-2004 , 10:36 AM

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huh?

Originally posted by dragonskin
dragon johnson?
its hard to take the critisism,but its easier to take from your buds here at sm. than from your boss later on, you dont have to impress us.

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Dragon who?

how nice my nickname repeats again in another user...how i like it....lol.....juli 2004 registrated....i see...Is my Nickname really so cool?

well I don't know what you think about critiques but I love critiques coz they help me to improve my skills....But if i think they aren't appropriate i just reply aking for reasons and a friendly discussion develops....and it ends with a convince.

thx for all the other replies and ill look what i can change to the legs of the dragon

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# 55 21-07-2004 , 05:19 PM

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alright

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# 56 21-07-2004 , 10:37 PM

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Its not fine to ´replace your text with a "xxx"...try to delete it k?

im unwrapping the whole thing and db8 is helping me in texturing....he has the knowledge ... user added image

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# 57 22-07-2004 , 02:11 PM

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hi guys...First of all i have to say:
I HATE UNWRAPPING AAAAAAAAAH

here are two spike i unwrapped in a too long time user added image

hope the spike collaborate with the otherdragonskin colour ive already posted...well here it is with spec map and bump!!!cb8 helped me a lot doing this!!!so get visit his slipknow thread user added image

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