i everybody, i have been working on this character for 1 week. i had a lot of difficulty connecting the arm and leg to the body cuz all the time, edges on the arm do not match with the edges on the body and same stuff with the leg so i have to create 3 side polygone and that is bad.anyway still a lot work to do(some bad stuff i want to change will be indicated in red in one my pictures). foot and hand need to be created.
so...here is my model so far.

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smoothed version(red thing are what i want to change )

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forgot to say that my body is not combined in the smoothed version picture.

the arms look short to me

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The arms just out at odd angles, its really a bit odd... and the proportions are all over just odd. I dont know...

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i just modeled ultimate spider-man and...i dont know why you say its out of proportion i modeled with some a nice references images, here is one.does anybody other then them can crits on him.

c&c are most welcome!

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start with move the arms up, now they're too low compared to the shoulders.

yhea its what i wanted to do(i drawn two red arrow above his arms on the thirth image)
thanx for the crits DJbLAZER.

please more critic!
will post an update as soon as possible.

The arms are too skinny for the shoulder mass.
Either bulk them up or slim down the shoulders. Taking the area back around the shoulder end of the clavicle (collar bone) should help a bit. More of an indent between the nipple and the top of the shoulder should help too (near the arm join).

You need to get the hands blocked in as its hard to tell if the arms are far too short (regardless of reference images)

Nice start though

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here is a very little update.connected the two parts together,
and i moved the arms up a little bit. i just tried a fast render.

let me know what you think!

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yo good job, but the arms look like its like stitched to the body, i think you should redo that part

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thanx for the reply. maybe i should redo this part but for me its just too hard to connect some part to others. just cant get the "trick" .