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copyright; no reproduction without permission on collaboration project (mirek Krejci 18/2/06).
A character is rather isolated at home (maybe he is a Maya freak
.establishing shot;
int; house; central character (from here know as 'A') moping about, maybe he's cleaning up or something and hits his head and it turned completely around so the back of his head is facing forward.
A; what's happening what's going on.
(starts complaining with the focus of complaints on his/her past)
A wanders around for a while until there is a knock at the door.
character 'b' enters;
B; hi , hey there mate, what are you doing, you seem a bit down today.
B doesn't seem to even notice A 's head is facing he wrong direction.
A; Nothing ever goes right for me. I was thinking about an old girlfriend and i just can't get her out of my head.
B; those days are gone, never to return. Feel like goin' out and and having a drink, that might fix you.
A; na, I'll stay here, I don't feel well. Something's wrong and i just cant figure what it is.
(of course it is because his head is facing backward and he can only see his past, not the future, hence no hope or future plans.)
B leaves.
A mopes around the house again, spending most of his time sitting at a table central to the room with head rating on hands.
Another knock;
'C' enters.
C; hi there.
C immediately sees A's head is facing backward but doesn't say a thing about it. He doesn't want to upset A
A; hi ther my good friend, good to see you. Give me some good news, I could do with some something is wrong and i can't figure what it is?
C; Well my friend, i don't have any news, you seem alright (lie).
after a little chit chat C leaves.
A wanders around some more, sits at the table, there's another knock. Again another character 'D' enters and doesn't notice A's head is facing backward.
A; I keep thinking about an old girlfriend. i just can't get her out of my head. Somethings wrong and i just can't figure what it is.
D; don't know mate, look I'm busy I got to go. Good to see you looking so well.
A; ????
After a dissolve or two (to create the passing of time) 'A' starts to feel normal even though his head is facing backward. He is getting used to it and thinks it is normal now.
Another knock at the door and 'E' enters.
E; My God, what's happened to you.
A; what are you talking about?
E; your head is facing backward, what's happened?
A; what the hell are you talking about?
(he's getting angry and defensive)
E; your looking in the wrong direction, you can't see in front of yourself, you can't see forward.
A; WHAT? What the hell are you on about, I'm fine, I'm doing real well. What's your problem.
E; No problem my friend, just telling you how i see it.
A; Look, I think you better get out of here, i don't know what your talking about and i feel just FINE.
E leaves (somehow in the script it must be shown of the viewer he is a TRUE friend, hence the dialogue of truth) shaking his head and concerned for A.
A sits back at his table, where he has spent most of his time. He knocks something off the table and bends down to pick it up knocking his head again (on the table) as he gets up.
His head slowly revolves back to normal.
A smiles gets up puts on a jacket and leaves the house yelling as he goes
A; hey E, where are you goin, i might come too.
END
Ok guys if you managed to read through all of that without wondering about my mental health and you think it OK. Remember it is just a VERY rough draft I just wrote and as a collaborative project is up to any change in style, script, anything. If people think this is worth working on or it's a start for collaboration, then lets get organized and collaborate.
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