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just need any comments...
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but it says its' corrupted
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The only thing I would work on a bit is his arms mostly from the elbows to the wrists. In some areas are bit stiff just something to look at.. try loosening the arms from the elbow down a bit more.
Also it would be nice to see the animation with a floor and a nice shadow. It would give the character some more presence, and I can see if your foot work is not slipping.... in a few areas his feet look like they slide in the wrong way a bit.
Just some suggestions
Really nice start great work..
Kurt
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nice though - have the same prob as emo.. visuals stop around half way through, but the sound continues...... would love to see how it ends when the rhythm picks up.
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