SomeGuy

Dude I would recommend making the breasts a little more relaxed, as right now they are a touch solid. And the clavicles at the neck base are a little sharp too, maybe just brush them over with artisan that should soften them a bit

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JAy

Ok, i'll do that.

this may be a stupid question but What does brushing them over with artisan mean?

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I have fixed up the breasts a bit.

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Ok... i have defined the shape of the ribs a bit more and have tried to make the breasts look more natuaral.
C&C Welcome

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The new breasts look a lot better... The first ones looked like Tori Spelling

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He He,
Here is an update... I forgot what i did
Oh-well.

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Worked it out, it was the legs. they were annoying me so i started them again. Also, i found a great Skin shader. It has about 50 properties in it.

Here is a shot from behind (It looks a bit odd)

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Legs!

The bottom looks a bit odd due to camera angle

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Back of legs

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decent progress there some guy
I should check the rear though as the lower part of the bottom looks way too low and gives a very saggy appearance. Also the waist definition around the back looks too high.

Keep at it though, you're definately improving your skills

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Thanks,
The butt was really bugging me, every time i convert the subdivis to poly's (That is the way i make it) It goes like that. After a bit of pulling and pushing it'll look better.

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Does this look better

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Another angle
(Strange... it seems to be emiting light from the crevise...)

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Here is the wireframe for anyone interested.
The geometry is a bit messed up around the shoulder area and the lower back. i am not sure weather i should start again and make a cleaner mesh?

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the back

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