Just started an animation course this year, and our first proper project was to recreate a painting in a 3D environment.

Here's the painting I had to do:



Here's my attempt:

The scene is built well, but you should turn on shadows, and the water seems off its shape. Maybe using multiple particles could get u the same effect.

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"The reasonable man adapts himself to the world; the unreasonable one persists in trying to adapt the world to himself. Therefore all progress depends on the unreasonable man."

George Bernard Shaw - Man and Superman

looks good

water could use some shaping and ya it could use some shadows

my crits are:
shadows
also the chair looks as if it is floating
shader on the water

modelling looks good though

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Now at SMU doing BSc 3D Computer Animation so its hard to get on here
My wire render tut https://forum.simplymaya.com/showthre...threadid=20973

thanks for the constructive criticism. Appreciated.

great work, only crit i have is the chair is floating lol, well seems to be anyway ... and the slash in the water if it is but it is hard to do that so yeah

marlon