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# 1 08-09-2004 , 11:29 AM

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hi...i finished my church...i got ideas from the "glimpse of the past"
tutorial..
c&c are welcome.

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# 2 08-09-2004 , 02:09 PM

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Oh It looks so fine mate..wonderful action..but the church in the middle of the picture disturbs a little bit. and the tree sucks balls. ok sorry for the teamkill mate.

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# 3 08-09-2004 , 02:53 PM

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I like it!

But looking at the pic, I dont understand where all these shadows come from. Seems like there is more than one sun!

As for composition, many people dont like when the subject is right in the middle of the frame. Personnaly, I dont think its a problem with yours.

I dont see any problem with the tree. Except the shadow.

Over all, great job!

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# 4 08-09-2004 , 03:06 PM

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Originally posted by Mantat
I like it!

But looking at the pic, I dont understand where all these shadows come from. Seems like there is more than one sun!

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ok mate. the "shadows" you critized are little bushes near the fence. there is only one spot light in the game. fubar told me all this shit.

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# 5 08-09-2004 , 04:04 PM

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Look at my drawing.

All the light seem to come from one direction, except the spot no 2.

Replace the spot light with a dome with FG and I think the render will be much better, because right now it seems like only the building is lit, to make it more realistic you have to light the whole area.

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# 6 08-09-2004 , 09:58 PM

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ok there is 1 thing i dont get. how come the tree next to the church has dead leaves but the rest of the tree are fresh and green.

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# 7 09-09-2004 , 01:00 AM

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Great stuff mate! Nice feel to it and good textures on the church. The bell tower seems a bit out of place with the textures on the rest. Great job tho user added image

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# 8 10-09-2004 , 02:28 AM

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Originally posted by gohan1842
ok there is 1 thing i dont get. how come the tree next to the church has dead leaves but the rest of the tree are fresh and green.

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Its symbolic..... user added image

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# 9 10-09-2004 , 11:55 AM

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Originally posted by DrRobotnik
The bell tower seems a bit out of place with the textures on the rest.

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Yes..you're right. i will make a better shader for the bell tower...i'll upload it when its finished..thanks for C&C so far !

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# 10 11-09-2004 , 10:10 AM

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Originally posted by FubaR
Yes..you're right. i will make a better shader for the bell tower...i'll upload it when its finished..thanks for C&C so far !

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okay mate..