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Old 13-11-2004, 01:59 PM   #16
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This is a really great car pic, very photo real and it would really impress people on car forums to the max.

The body of the car is perfect in my view has the correct shame and the prefect amount of reflecation in the body maybe some of the other people don't goto car shows much but I can tell you now, you can really get a car to reflect light in real life like this render.

just some minor prolbems though,

the wing isn't right and that's very noticable compared to the rest of the car.

The front lights look ok, but the inside texture could be done a bit bitter I guess, more defined about the indicator light and maybe a bit of a light bulb or a better idea that there's a light in there currently looks ok, but doesn't seem to have the right look though.

Needs a little touch up on the front wheel arch as it's not completely round and I think most people notice this first and can see somethings not quite right.

Also your front seats don't look right as well, but nothing bad about them up to you if you wanted to fix them up more.

Anyway that's all I can see wrong with this, road texture is good for me and is perfect enough for this to me, maybe a strong yellow line at the other side of the car so it comes across as a road better.

All rite that's me.
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Old 16-11-2004, 10:08 PM   #17
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Hey its darn good work there!

I know its not perfect but its really a cool image.

Can u please tell me what shaders have u used & what renderer has been used?

I've never rendrered anything photorealistic , so am inspired & curious!

Great work, keep it up!
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Old 16-11-2004, 10:51 PM   #18
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Yeah I'd get some reference off the web and have another look. It does look kind of flat here and there. Are you using a layered shader? As I think it would benefit from it as cars have two gloss coats, paint and laquer this why you get that cool looking reflection on cars like this.

Also check the model around those headlights they look a bit low res right now. Overall its a great job but I think observation is the key now on this one. Keep up the good work and give us an update soon

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Old 18-11-2004, 11:40 PM   #19
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HI ALL, thanks for the positive comments and constructive criticisms!!the rendering is done in MentalRay - for the shader copy this link in your browser :

http://www.3dfuturebits.org/index.ph...54027de21e83c4

this is the test of new shader


this is one old wireframe with low poly version of the interior
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Old 19-11-2004, 09:58 AM   #20
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Totally Cool!!

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Old 19-11-2004, 07:24 PM   #21
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Please excuse me while I pick my jaw up off the floor.
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Old 21-11-2004, 09:48 PM   #22
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Thanks a lot for the link regarding the shader!

Your new rendering rocks!!

I am highly inspired to work more & more & to get the best hardware & get results similar to yours!

Pls tell me whats your hardware including agp card; also tell me show long did this gorgeous image take to render!

Thx again & great work!

Btw, are u working for some studio?
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Old 23-11-2004, 12:54 AM   #23
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Nice work!! Car looks really nice!!
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Old 23-11-2004, 08:29 AM   #24
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Holy m0ly that amazing!
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Old 16-01-2005, 12:53 PM   #25
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Thank you guys for all comment!!

this is my new render:




for winsome

my hardware are:

PC: pentium 4 1.5Gh, 1024 MB of Ram, 2 hd 7800rpm 50/120GB, ATI FIRE GL 8800 128 MB...

notebook: Pentium 4 3.0 Gh Prescott, 1024 Mb of Ram, hd 60GB 7800rpm, Ati 9700 pro 256MB,.......

No, i don't work for some studio, i'm a freelancer
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Old 16-01-2005, 01:10 PM   #26
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HEY KEVIN! GET THIS IN THE GALLERY!!!

AMAZING JOB MATE!
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Old 16-01-2005, 04:18 PM   #27
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It`s awesome. Is even better than the first one.
Where did you learn to do that? I need to learn to do something like this.
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Old 17-01-2005, 12:37 PM   #28
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wow the reflection is really great it makes it even better that this is one of the best cars ever designed offcourse
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Old 17-01-2005, 05:46 PM   #29
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Now i take back what i said earlier. The new shader has made a big difference. Nice Car.
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Old 17-01-2005, 07:54 PM   #30
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WOW. Freaking amazing job!
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