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Old 05-07-2007, 04:00 AM   #1
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this is my first animated short, all comments are welcome!

http://www.metacafe.com/watch/711382/vanhel_singh/

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Well i suppose that those purple lines when he jumps down shouldnt be there. Otherwise good job for a first.

Its kinda hard to see but it looks like the warewolfs teeth doesnt follow the jaw.

And the diablo begining doesnt really suit with the batman begining, you should stick to one.
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thanks forthe reply, your right the teeth did follow the jaw, i was having trouble with it,
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