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Old 02-09-2008, 05:16 PM   #1
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I have done lots of models but this is my first total scene. Its not exactly what i wanted as far as the render but I'm still learning about rendering different layers and combining them. still i'm proud of where I am at this point.
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Old 02-09-2008, 05:17 PM   #2
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Here is the picture.
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Looks good, it could use some tidbits like some motion blur on the planes, right now its kinda static looking.
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Its all a bit clean, theres no damage, dirt or rust.....
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it need more work in rendering such as color correction and damage textures and motion blur and more about atmosphere... but it seems that you have done the right modeling
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Default Thank you all for your input

You are all very right. I have started studying rendering techniques now more deeply so that i can learn to improve my renders. After i understand rendering better i will rework this scene a put in up again. Thanks for the input!
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