So i like the animations.
Thou your editing work needs some touchup.
Dont add black screens in between shots.
Try to do combinations of cutscene and fade-ins
Some camera shots look kinda wonky like you all of a sudden looze the feel of speed. Try to keep the speed consistant towards the background and the front ellements.
Looked like the ships had an rubber band on them attached to the star
But i like the models and animation, nicely done.