Old Woman in the Park
 

Well schools all done, all graduated up. The reel is completed, but I think more work or maybe additions are needed. Here's an example from my reel.

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Birds are nice. Ground is great. Tuch of texture stretch on the wood, but all is good.

I can dig it.

All is good except for that the food looks like vomit (in my opinion)

ah didn't notice about the food. Yeah its suposto be birdseed righ t? well as it is now it looks like umm somehting not bird seed. Some smaller particals of it around on her hand and falling through the fingures would help.

Yah, I was waiting for a response like that for the bird food, I used a ramp shader with a noise map. And the render made it much darker than I wanted, I think need to re-light and render the scene. And maybe add more detail to the food.
Thanx for the input Gohan.