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Mickeal_alex 28-02-2008 01:33 AM

My portfolio
 
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Hy all! I've been working on my portfolio and i just want to see some comments about it

Mickeal_alex 28-02-2008 01:35 AM

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Mickeal_alex 28-02-2008 01:36 AM

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Mickeal_alex 28-02-2008 01:39 AM

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Mickeal_alex 28-02-2008 01:39 AM

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Mickeal_alex 28-02-2008 01:40 AM

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And here is another house

Mickeal_alex 28-02-2008 01:45 AM

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Now i am working on a car but i don't know if it looks okay so far

Mickeal_alex 28-02-2008 01:48 AM

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Here is a wireframe

GioChrono 28-02-2008 02:57 AM

Hey, nice work.

One thing with the interiors, the skirting looks a bit small, I've never seen skirting that's only an inch or two high, I may be wrong so please tell if you know otherwise.

The car looks pretty good to me so far, keep it up

Gio

Mickeal_alex 28-02-2008 03:03 AM

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Thanks , don't know really how it is everiting i've made put in that house. The car i've started to get some problems and i think i will remake it from scrath because of the wireframe i've been getting some streching and lumpy look in this area

Mickeal_alex 28-02-2008 03:06 AM

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Here is the new wireframe so far and i think it looks claner

GioChrono 28-02-2008 03:08 AM

Prob just got two many edges running over the arch. Take some out and end the loops at the wheel arch rather than curving up to follow. You should find it easier to control and remove the lumpyness. Don't think you need to start from scratch.

Gio

GioChrono 28-02-2008 03:09 AM

Ah, you beat me to it

Gio

zujalica 28-02-2008 04:31 AM

Everything looks great, but there is something strange about the sofas (the brownish one more), they look a little bit to much solid if you know what i mean.

Zuja

Mayaniac 28-02-2008 06:13 AM

Very nice work Mickeal!

The Interior renders look pretty good, though some areas are stronger than others. Overall, It's pretty sweet.
The only areas that bug me are: In the first Image the Door looks kinds weird (not sure why) Also in the later Interior Image the Rug thing that all the furniture is sat on seems too thick.

The car looks good, but your right the old edge loops did have some probs, though the new one look allot better.

Anyway, Nice work ;)


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