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tariqrf

09-02-2003 09:46 PM

Mhhhhhountain bike

i have been working on this for 2 hours now.. rebuilding again and a again...... NeWay, here is the final render:

i was wondering, is this good enough for the gallery????

tariqrf

09-02-2003 09:50 PM

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forgot the main thing... :banghead:

BabyDuck

09-02-2003 10:44 PM

oh - it looks very nice. tell us your secret how you finished that in 2 hours :banana:

tariqrf

09-02-2003 10:56 PM

two hours of work |today| !!!

ereitz

09-02-2003 11:57 PM

hey tariqrf - i like the tires and the frame... nice work!

the spokes seem a little thick tho... and i wonder if there are too few of them...

also what happened to the seat? are you working from a reference model? that's the best way i believe...

i think it's a good beginning but you can take it a lot further... :)

tariqrf

10-02-2003 12:04 AM

thanx.. i decided that i will change it from finished work to work in progress.. i am going to add the brakes, the chains, a better seat.. nuts and bolts... this that... phew.... i have another final half day to work on it...

wish me luck,
Tariq

Kevin

10-02-2003 02:52 AM

ground needs a little work, over all the bike is very nice!

Danny is the gallery decider, I will leave him to give final desisions

dannyngan

10-02-2003 03:36 AM

I already gave Tariq comments in IRC, and, like he said, he's going to continue work on it. Here is a snippet from the chat log:

Code:

[1:53:41] danny: looks really good

[1:53:48] danny: there are a few areas that are a bit odd

[1:53:50] Tariq: gallery???

[1:53:53] danny: not just yet

[1:54:16] danny: the area where the seat connects to the body looks blurred

[1:54:18] Tariq: ok

[1:54:21] danny: not sure what's going on there

[1:54:37] Tariq: i did that... there was a small mistake there... what if i fix it???

[1:54:58] danny: tariq: also, maybe it's the camera angle, but it looks like the frame crosses into the rear tire

[1:55:28] danny: tariq: you should definitely fix the blurred area

[1:55:35] danny: right now, it draws attention to it

[1:55:40] danny: "look at me! I'm a mistake!"

[1:55:44] danny: definitely don't want that

tariqrf

10-02-2003 04:13 PM

yep... but dont expect the updates to be near anywhere.... i decided to animate it... but for the gallery, the image will be uploaded ASAP...

Pholamatus,
Tariq

baldgeek

10-02-2003 05:54 PM

Are you going to put a chain and sprockets etc on the bike or is it going to be a strictly downhill bike?

Any chance of some suspension too?

Alan	10-02-2003 07:48 PM

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Are you going to put a chain and sprockets etc on the bike or is it going to be a strictly downhill bike?

lol :) didnt notice that until you pointed it out!

For me the ground looks wrong, it seems like the bike is massive compared to the ground, the ground looks like a mountain range. There needs to be more detail and dirt etc on the ground maybe some rocks grass etc. It's little details like that that will elevate this pic (Which is good don't get me wrong) from good to excellent

Also, sorry, just noticed that the tires look too flat on the raised rubber bits.

Keep up the good work though!!

Alan

tariqrf

11-02-2003 05:48 PM

thanx fot the suggestions..

i am working on the project like hell... wait for the final render... suggestion.. keep coming!!

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