Mercedes_slk_320
 

Hi

this is my first try at modeling a car hope to be finished soon.

any comments and tips appreciated.

thanks

:beer:

llokin good for a first car

is it polys an sub d's

there is a patch just before the door starts where it goes inwards an doesnt flow with the rest of the body - i think that ut should be adjusted to get a better flowing surface (or is the car like that cos i cant renmember what it looks like)

good luck

Mercedes
 

This it again please tell me where the problem is or save the pic and mark the problem.

there those bits dont flow quite right

overall its very lumpy... but as a first model its prety dang good. :)

Mercedes
 

Thanx matt.

I tried 2 fix it hope it looks better.

thanx.

its still full of lumps but thats alright :)

Mercedes
 

Matt

I`ll try to get rid of the lumps l8er first gotta get done with my exams.

thanx

:beer:

good luck wiv ur exams

lumps r a pain in the ass to get rid of cos u need to tweak it by fine amounts but for a first go its good

can you post wireframes of the car?

Try assigning a phong with a nice bright colour (sush as red) and then applying this to the object, along with a simple 3 point light set up, hit 7 to enable lighting and use this to evaluate the surface for lumps, bumps etc as the lighting interaction lets you see wheres there's problems and helps to iron them out.#

Hope it helps

Oh forgot to add, adjust the cosine power to suit.

Mercedes
 

This is the wire frame

Have you got a low poly version of the wireframe?

yeah... we would need the low poly one, but just looking at the high poly one and its tesselation I would guess that you have a ton of 3 or n sided polys. my $0.02